Fucking diet...1

2011-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Dominic

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Is the title so bad? But It is not that worse than my body. During Chuseok holiday, I tried not to eat too much and I think I did well. After Chuseok, my weight is the same as before. But my thigh seems to be much fatter and the worse is that it is not only my feeling. My sister also think of my thigh as I do. I don't know why it seems to be fatter or is to be really fatter. Is it because of fruit? Actually, I ate a lot of fruit on Chuseok especially grapes. They were so sweet. Is the fruit sugar the reason in this situation? Am I a person who would be fat by eating only fruit? I was so gloomy.

강사 첨삭

Hello there,       Thank you  for this composition. It's not probably because of fruits  that your thighs are fatter. ^^ Maybe, it is because you walk a lot. Do you think that's possible? Anyways, I hope you will be healthy. Take care! See you later! Is the title so bad? >>Correct  But It is not that worse than my body. >>But it is not worse than my body.  During Chuseok holiday, I tried not to eat too much and I think I did well. >>Correct After Chuseok, my weight is the same as before. >>Correct  But my thigh seems to be much fatter and the worse is that it is not only my feeling. >>But my thigh seems to be much fatter, and worse is that I am not the only person who thinks this way.  My sister also think of my thigh as I do. >> My sister also thinks my thigh is as fat as I think it is.  I don't know why it seems to be fatter or is to be really fatter. >> I don't know why it seems to be fatter or is it really fatter?  Is it because of fruit? >>Is it because of fruits? Actually, I ate a lot of fruit on Chuseok especially grapes. >>Actuallu I ate a lot of fruits during Chuseok, especially grapes. They were so sweet. >>Correct  Is the fruit sugar the reason in this situation? >>Correct Am I a person who would be fat by eating only fruit? >>Am I the only person who gets fat by only eating fruits? I was so gloomy. >>Correct

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