Fucking diet...2
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So I have gone on a short diet for 3 days. The way is just simple but the processing is very hard to me. I ate nothing just water in the morning and ate lunch in the school dining room. At this time, I really tried not to overeat. and in dinner time, I ate only a cup of “special K” Do you know it? It is kind of cornflakes for dieter. Even though I have five classes after just special K, I have kept my eating plan. Plus, I did some stretching too. Of course, I didn't expect too much in just 3 days. But at least, just feeling light or losing 500g is all that I expected. However, until now nothing has changed. I don't know what I should do with my full schedules. I already know the exercising is the best way but you know, I have no time to do it.
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So I have gone on a short diet for 3 days.
>>Correct
The way is just simple but the processing is very hard to me.
>> The way is just simple but the process is very hard to me.
I ate nothing just water in the morning and ate lunch in the school dining room.
>> I took nothing but water in the morning and ate lunch in the school dining room. [or cafeteria]
At this time, I really tried not to overeat.
>>Correct
and in dinner time, I ate only a cup of “special K” Do you know it?
>> And during dinner time, I ate only a cup of “special K” do you know it?
It is kind of cornflakes for dieter.
>>It is kind of cornflakes for dieters.
Even though I have five classes after just special K, I have kept my eating plan.
>>Correct
Plus, I did some stretching too.
>>Correct
Of course, I didn't expect too much in just 3 days.
>>Correct
But at least, just feeling light or losing 500g is all that I expected.
>>Correct
However, until now nothing has changed.
>>Correct
I don't know what I should do with my full schedules.
>>Correct
I already know the exercising is the best way but you know, I have no time to do it.
>> I already know exercising is the best way but you know, I have no time to do it.
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