full moon

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 Today, culturl events in Korea.

>>There is a cultural event in Korea today.

 It is the first full moon of the new year.

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 Other important festivals.

>>Another important festival.
 Moon viewing events are held at numerous spots onthe night of the first moon of the lunar year.

>>Moon viewing events are held at numerous spots at night at the first moon of the lunar year.
 Looking at the full moon.

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 Most korea people pray for the wishes of the this year.

>> Most Korean people pray for their wishes for this year.
 We made food five kinds of cereal and five kinds of boiled vegetables.

>>We make five kinds of cereals and five kinds of boiled vegetables.
 We perform various cultural events according to the time when the full moon rises.

>>We perform various cultural events according to the time where the full moon rises.

 It was rainning in the morning and rain stopped in the afternoon.

>> It was raining in the morning and the rain stopped in the afternoon.

 Maybe today, the evening event will be followed.

>>So maybe we will continue performing the evening event.
 Good bye.

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