Full moon day
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Today,is fullmoon day.
>> Today is a full moon day .
There is a tradition on full moon day in Korea.
>> Correct
It\'s not special day because I don\'t see moon.
>> It\'s not a special day because I can\'t see the moon.
We usually eat five-grain rice , eat nuts with praying our wish. and giving away our\'s heat and so on.
>> We usually eat five-grain rice and nuts while making a wish, passing or giving away our heat and so on.
My mom received some nuts from post office to have a this tradition.
>> Correct
But someone who don\'t interest in moon it will be not special day.
>> But for someone who doesn\'t have interest in full moon, it will not be a special day.
There is another tradition in Korea.
>> Correct
It is we have three dog days.
>>It\'s what we call three dog days.
It is on summer and people usually eat hot foods to engergetic.
>> It is on summer and people usually eat hot food to be energetic.
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