full sentence

2010-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Did you see my effort to build full sentences this morning? You noticed many times that I couldn't build long sentences. Yes, I did. I was not free from using a relative pronoun, a relative pronoun and a preposition. But I made up my mind to express my opinion as using full sentences. So I need your help. Although I enjoy talking with you I have trouble expressing my mind. For example, in the morning I just want to say your life pattern is not like me. But I used the word 'weird' a little nagative word. Oh my~ sorry~~ Why the word came to my mind? Please don't get me wrong. I just an immature student.^^ You can correct my word and sentence any time. I glad that I have a teacher like you.

강사 첨삭

Hi J!!! Yeah, you are right. Your sentences are now longer. Anyways, you don't have to apologize for using a different term. I am not offended at all. Okay I promise to correct your sentences if we have enough time. I just don't want to interrupt you while you are talking that's why I just put the corrections on the website. Well, see you on Friday!!! Take care girl. Lei J   Did you see my effort to make complete sentences this morning?>>correctYou noticed many times that I couldn't build long sentences.>>correctYes, I did.>>correctMy skill is limited from using a relative pronoun, a relative pronoun and a preposition. >>correctBut I made up my mind to express my opinion using full sentences.>>correctSo I need your help. >>correctAlthough I enjoy talking with you I have trouble expressing my mind.>>correctFor example, in the morning I just want to say your life pattern is not like me.>>For example, this morning, I just wanted to say that you lifestyle is different from mine.But I used the word 'weird' which is a little nagative word.>>correctOh my~ sorry~~>>correctI don't know why that word came to my mind? >>correctPlease don't get me wrong. >>correct I just an immature student.^^>>I am just an immature student.You can correct my word and sentence any time.>>correctI glad that I have a teacher like you.>>I am glad to have a teacher like you.

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