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2010-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 kate

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Kim: Hey yo man, what's up!! Park : Awww, I got a 50 in my test score. Kim: Wow, that's very good!! I got 5 on the test. Kim: Anyway, Are you good at sports Park: Yeah, I run 100m in 90 seconds!! and my batting average is .001 I have one hit on 1000 baseball games. I 'm so good at sports! Park: Do you do powerenglish? It's very good!! Kim: Really I didn't do it. What's it about!! Park: It's a talking class. The tutor's evaluations, mispronunciation and grammar check is correct and very complicated Kim: Wow I want to do it Park: Also, there are various levels. Lastly, we can improve our writing skills too because we should write a diary or a story everyday!! Kim: I'm going home. Park: Why?? Kim: I love PowerEnglish!! I'm going to do it now!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Joey! Wow! I'm so glad to know you enjoy your class here at PowerEnglish! You are a very good and smart student Joey! I am so delighted to see a role play composition! Very Good! It's like reading a comic book without the pictures.       Kim: Hey yo man, what's up!! >>correctPark : Awww, I got a 50 in my test score. >>correctKim: Wow, that's very good!! I got 5 on the test. >>correct Kim: Anyway, Are you good at sports >>Anyway, are you good at sports?Park: Yeah, I run 100m in 90 seconds!! and my batting average is .001 I have one hit on 1000 baseball games. I 'm so good at sports! >>Yeah, I run 100m in 90 seconds!! My batting average is .001 and I have one hit on 1000 baseball games. I 'm so good at sports!Park: Do you do powerenglish? It's very good!! >>Do you know powerenglish? It's very good!!Kim: Really I didn't do it. What's it about!! >> Really? I don't know. What's it about?!Park: It's a talking class. The tutor's evaluations, mispronunciation and grammar check is correct and very complicated >>It's a talking class. The tutor's would evaluate and check your pronunciation adn grammar by detail.Kim: Wow I want to do it >>Wow! I want to try it.Park: Also, there are various levels. Lastly, we can improve our writing skills too because we should write a diary or a story everyday!! >>correct Kim: I'm going home.>>correct Park: Why??>>correctKim: I love PowerEnglish!! I'm going to do it now!! >>I love PowerEnglish!! I'm going to have a class now!!

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