Fun Happen This Week
학생이 쓴 원문
I wanted to get an iPad since 2 years ago.
Finally, I got an iPad this week.
It is Air 5 and it is pink.
I think it is soooo pretty and nice.
So I\'ll study with my iPad soon.
I can\'t wait for that.
However, My apple pencil didn\'t arrive, so I am waiting for it.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Great job on accomplishing your homework. I corrected the grammar, punctuation, and rephrased some sentences for clarity. Congratulations on your new iPad too! You deserve it!
Sincerely,
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>>> I wanted to get an iPad for the past 2 years.
Finally, I got an iPad this week.
Finally, I got an iPad this week.
>>> CORRECT!!
It is Air 5 and it is pink.
It is Air 5 and it is pink.
>>> It\'s the Air 5 and it\'s pink.
I think it is soooo pretty and nice.
I think it is soooo pretty and nice.
>>> I think it\'s so pretty and nice.
So I\'ll study with my iPad soon.
So I\'ll study with my iPad soon.
>>> So, I\'ll study with my iPad soon.
I can\'t wait for that.
I can\'t wait for that.
>>> CORRECT!!
However, My apple pencil didn\'t arrive, so I am waiting for it.
However, My apple pencil didn\'t arrive, so I am waiting for it.
>>> However, my Apple Pencil didn\'t arrive, so I\'m waiting for it.
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