Fund and trust
학생이 쓴 원문
The ideal foundation of marriage comes from two parts, which is economic state and psychological stability. First of all, It is necessary to agree on each other’s economic condition for stable marriage. We can maintain marriage by attending family events and bringing up the kid based on enough funds. And also, trust for each other’s decision is important to have a bravery and stability. The attitude to blame and change something consistently makes relationship worsen. Since we decided to get married each other, we basically need to support and respect him/her as a life partner.
강사 첨삭
Well, you\'re actually right, Ms. [Name] [이름]! Financial stability and emotional well-being are essential for a successful marriage. When both are present, couples are more likely to remain happy together. Thank you for this essay.
~T. Jenna
The ideal foundation of marriage comes from two parts, which is economic state and psychological stability.
~T. Jenna
The ideal foundation of marriage comes from two parts, which is economic state and psychological stability.
>> The ideal foundation of marriage comes from two parts, which are economic state and psychological stability.
First of all, It is necessary to agree on each other’s economic condition for stable marriage.
>>First of all, it is necessary to agree on each other’s economic condition for stable marriage.
We can maintain marriage by attending family events and bringing up the kid based on enough funds.
Correct, or
>>We can sustain a marriage by participating in family gatherings and raising the child with sufficient financial resources.
>>We can sustain a marriage by participating in family gatherings and raising the child with sufficient financial resources.
And also, trust for each other’s decision is important to have a bravery and stability.
>>Also, trust in each other\'s decisions is important to have bravery and stability.
The attitude to blame and change something consistently makes relationship worsen.
>>The attitude of blaming and changing something consistently worsens a relationship.
Since we decided to get married each other, we basically need to support and respect him/her as a life partner.
>>Since we decided to get married, we basically need to support and respect each other as life partners.
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