Funeral Sermon 1
학생이 쓴 원문
My friends, God is with all of us today, no matter what. No matter what we have gone through. No matter what we are experiencing. God is with all of us today in this place. Today, we are here to honor and remember the life of Name. One of the ways to work through our hurt and pain in losing a loved one is to share stories remembering the person and the positive difference that they made in this world. We know that Name was not a perfect person. But we also know that he/she touched many of our lives. Name was a lifelong member of Henderson UMC. He devoted his life to Jesus through the community of Henderson. He was a good Christian, friend husband, father and grandfather. Pastor Esther is going to share more stories and memories about his life. Today in the midst of our sadness and we can take comfort in the fact that we know that NAME is with Jesus, and when all is said and done that is all that matters in life. The true meaning of life is not about the house you lived in,
강사 첨삭
I am grateful for your message, Han! It\'s one good reminder! I will continue editing the second one.-Faith-
My friends, God is with all of us today, no matter what. >> My friends, God is with all of us today, no matter what.
OR My friends, God is in our midst, no matter what.
No matter what we have gone through.
>> CORRECT
No matter what we are experiencing.
>> No matter what we are experiencing now.
God is with all of us today in this place.
>> CORRECT
OR God is with us in this place today.
Today, we are here to honor and remember the life of Name.
>> CORRECT
OR Today, we are here to honor and remember the life of our dear brother/sister, Name.
One of the ways to work through our hurt and pain in losing a loved one is to share stories remembering the person and the positive difference that they made in this world.
>> One of the ways to work through our hurt and pain of losing a loved one is to share stories remembering a person and the positive difference that they made in this world.
We know that Name was not a perfect person.
>> CORRECT
But we also know that he/she touched many of our lives.
>> But we also know that he/she touched so many lives.
Name was a lifelong member of Henderson UMC.
>> CORRECT
He devoted his life to Jesus through the community of Henderson.
>> CORRECT
He was a good Christian, friend husband, father and grandfather.
>> He was a good Christian, friend, husband, father and grandfather.
Pastor Esther is going to share more stories and memories about his life.
>> CORRECT
Today in the midst of our sadness and we can take comfort in the fact that we know that NAME is with Jesus, and when all is said and done that is all that matters in life.
>>Today in the midst of our sorrow, we can take comfort in the fact that we know that NAME is with Jesus, and when all is said and done, that is all that matters in life.
The true meaning of life is not about the house you lived in,
>> The true meaning of life is not about the house you live in.
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