Funeral Sermon 2
학생이 쓴 원문
In times like these, we realize that only three things last forever: God, His Word, and people’s souls. God is eternal and everlasting. Once we have a relationship with God, we are able to enjoy the life for eternity. This eternity begins here and now. And of course beyond our death. It means we all are saved through our Lord, Jesus. As Jesus Christ died on the cross and rose again from the grave, we are able to experience the power of resurrection here and now. And of course beyond our death.
Therefore, today, none of us face the pain of losing NAME alone. The reason is that God is here. And, as we read earlier in Psalm 23, He wants to help carry us through this darkest valley. And Psalm 100 says,... Dear friends in Christ, let us trust in God and let us trust his promise to us. Nothing, not a thing, can separate us from God’s love. Please remember no matter what God is with us today. And God is with name now.
강사 첨삭
Goodnight, Han and Jane! I will also be praying for your funeral service. May all of you be comforted!-Faith-
In times like these, we realize that only three things last forever: God, His Word, and people’s souls. >> CORRECT
God is eternal and everlasting.
>> CORRECT
Once we have a relationship with God, we are able to enjoy the life for eternity.
>> CORRECT
This eternity begins here and now.
>> CORRECT
And of course beyond our death.
>> And of course, beyond our death.
It means we all are saved through our Lord, Jesus.
>> CORRECT
As Jesus Christ died on the cross and rose again from the grave, we are able to experience the power of resurrection here and now.
>> CORRECT
And of course beyond our death.
>> And again, beyond our death.
Therefore, today, none of us face the pain of losing NAME alone.
Therefore, today, none of us face the pain of losing NAME alone.
>> Therefore, today, not only us face the pain of losing NAME alone.
The reason is that God is here.
>> CORRECT
And, as we read earlier in Psalm 23, He wants to help carry us through this darkest valley.
>> And, as we read earlier in Psalm 23, He wants to help and carry us through this darkest valley.
And Psalm 100 says,...
>> CORRECT
Dear friends in Christ, let us trust in God and let us trust his promise to us.
>> Dear friends in Christ, let us trust in God and let us trust his promise for us.
Nothing, not a thing, can separate us from God’s love.
>> CORRECT
Please remember no matter what God is with us today.
>> Please remember that no matter what, God is with us today.
And God is with name now.
>> CORRECT
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