Funnest story

The funnest story in my life, which is not easy to choose one story. Anyway, one of the stories which I momorized is a honeymoon. We went to the Philliphin Cebu for a meeriage trip. We had a funny holoiday for 5 days. We went to massage shop, pool and diving etc. It was the one of the funny stories. Today, our partner of a American company came to Korea to meet us. So I should go to the hotel to meet them. For a long time, we have met them for design projects. They told me that they have some business with Korean companies. So they will meet them which I don't know. Anyway, it is good chance to communicate American natives in English. Yesterday, I would try to tell you about plastic surgery of a jaw. The popular lank in Korea is below.

Mr. [이름]^^

Thank you for sharing your stories with me. I finally realized why we're not getting or understanding each other when I asked you about your funniest memory or experience. I think you are confused with the word fun (most fun) and funny (funniest). And I've also noticed that you oftentimes intermix/interchange memorize and remember. Please try to study those words that confuses you. I will try to explain them to you later in class.

See you!

~Ella

 

MY CORRECTIONS^^:

The funnest story in my life, which is not easy to choose one story.

>>Choosing just one most fun story in my life is not easy.
Anyway, one of the stories which I momorized is a honeymoon.

>>Anyway, one of the stories that I remembered is my honeymoon.
We went to the Philliphin Cebu for a meeriage trip.

>>We went to Cebu, Philippines for our honeymoon.

We had a funny holoiday for 5 days.

>>We had a fun holiday for 5 days.

We went to massage shop, pool and diving etc.

>>We had ourselves pampered at the spa, swam at the pool, went diving, and etc.
It was the one of the funny stories.

>>It was one of the most fun stories in my life.
Today, our partner of a American company came to Korea to meet us.

>>Today, our American partner company came to Korean to meet us.
So I should go to the hotel to meet them.

>>CORRECT J
For a long time, we have met them for design projects.

>>A long time ago, we had met them for design projects.

>>For a long time, we have been meeting them for design projects.
They told me that they have some business with Korean companies.

>>CORRECT J
So they will meet them which I don't know.

>>But I didn뭪 know that they will meet them.
Anyway, it is good chance to communicate American natives in English.

>>Anyway, it is a good chance/opportunity to communicate to American natives in English.
Yesterday, I would try to tell you about plastic surgery of a jaw.

>>Yesterday, I was trying to tell you about jaw reconstruction/ plastic surgery of the jaw.
The popular lank in Korea is below.

>>It is below the most popular rank in Korea when it comes to cosmetic surgery.