Future of human educator in class.

2020-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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While it is noticeable that computerized appliances, which feature the artificial intelligence, have superseded human being in many areas, I belive that it is not going to happen in the educational setting. This is because the whole process of teaching and learning involves many other aspects beyond the mere transmission of knowledge. In terms of delivering information to students, the AI featured machines will do much better than human teachers for sure since they are able to store a tremendous amount of data and have no possibility of being confused. Nevertheless, a human educator plays a crucial role in a class from organizing the academic schedule to cultivating students with diverse qualities. For instance, when children make mistakes and feel embarrassed, there is nothing computer can do, whereas teachers can suggest how to cope with problems, how to deal with negative feelings, and why not to repeat the same mistakes. So, human will perform its distinctive roles in future school

강사 첨삭

Hi Drexel! Thank you fro investing a little of your time with your homework. I really appreciate the effort. ^ ^
Nice thoughts you have here. Just be mindful with your subject-verb agreement.
Definitely agree with you. Teachers/educators still play a crucial role in education and no AI can replace that. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

While it is noticeable that computerized appliances, which feature the artificial intelligence, have superseded human being in many areas, I belive that it is not going to happen in the educational setting. 
>>CORRECT (...human beings; *believe)
This is because the whole process of teaching and learning involves many other aspects beyond the mere transmission of knowledge. 
>>CORRECT
In terms of delivering information to students, the AI featured machines will do much better than human teachers for sure since they are able to store a tremendous amount of data and have no possibility of being confused. 
>>CORRECT
Nevertheless, a human educator plays a crucial role in a class from organizing the academic schedule to cultivating students with diverse qualities. 
>>CORRECT
For instance, when children make mistakes and feel embarrassed, there is nothing computer can do, whereas teachers can suggest how to cope with problems, how to deal with negative feelings, and why not to repeat the same mistakes. 
>>CORRECT (...there is nothing a computer can do)
So, human will perform its distinctive roles in future school.
>>CORRECT (...humans; schools)

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