Future travel plan
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In the future, I want to travel to Egypt. I heard that there are a lot of archaeological architecture and remains if ancient city. I want to visit museum in Cairo and appreciate stone statues and mummies. In addition, I want to tour inside the Pyramid and ride camel. I know it is little bit dangerous place to travel alone, so I will travel through travel assistance company.
p.s.) I didn\'t know that there is place to upload the homework. I\'m sorry :(
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Hi,
No problem. I forgot to tell you about this earlier, so no worries. ^^
I\'d love to go to Egypt as well. I love historical sites too!
-Teacher Ash
In the future, I want to travel to Egypt.
>> CORRECT
I heard that there are a lot of archaeological architecture and remains if ancient city.
>> I heard that there are a lot of archaeological architecture and remains of the ancient city.
I want to visit museum in Cairo and appreciate stone statues and mummies.
>> I want to visit the museum in Cairo and appreciate the stone statues and mummies.
In addition, I want to tour inside the Pyramid and ride camel.
>> In addition to that, I also want to tour inside the Pyramid and ride a camel.
I know it is little bit dangerous place to travel alone, so I will travel through travel assistance company.
>> I know it is little bit dangerous to travel the place alone, so I will travel through a travel agency.
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