Galaxy 10 will realease tommorrow.
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Tommorrow the new smartphone will come. S10. It will really expensiv ebut it seems that it is good. I experienced Galaxy 10 when I went to Lotte World. The code is when we touch the screen it recognizes who is user. And the design looks good. LGPhone is very bad and the batter is too short but samsung it will be better.
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Tommorrow the new smartphone will come.
>> Tomorrow, a new Samsung smartphone will be released.
S10. It will really expensiv ebut it seems that it is good.
>>
I experienced Galaxy 10 when I went to Lotte World.
>> Correct
The code is when we touch the screen it recognizes who is user. And the design looks good.
>> Correct
or
>> The code is, when we touch the screen, it recognizes who is user and the design looks good.
LGPhone is very bad and the batter is too short but samsung it will be better.
>> LG Phone is very bad and the battery life is too short but Samsung is better.
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