Gambling isn't worth spending my own money.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Shy
Gambling isn't worth spending my own money.
I don't like gambling.
I have never gone to horse racing place.
I hardly play poker.
But when I go on a picnic with my companion for break time,
I play poker with my co-worker unavoidably.
강사 첨삭
Hello!!
I don't know how to play poker or any card games because I am not also a fan of gambling?^I believe it is a bad habit because it will give you a lot of debt..
Anyway, the good thing you don't like it too?lt;o:p>
It is better that way..
By the way, your composition is correct. There are no mistakes on your sentences.. Good Job!!
See you in class!!
T. Shy
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