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Q: What do you like to do except napping?
A: I like to play games and play soccer.
I like games because I can make creative and fun!
I also like soccer because it also gives me fun and when I be a MVP in this game, I can have this amazing happiness!!!
강사 첨삭
Finally!!! Thank you David!! ^_^
Q: What do you like to do except napping?
>>Correct.
A: I like to play games and play soccer.
>>Correct.
I like games because I can make creative and fun!
>> I like games because I can make creative things and it is fun!
I also like soccer because it also gives me fun and when I be a MVP in this game, I can have this amazing happiness!!!
>> I also like soccer because it also makes me have fun and when I become an MVP in this game, I can have this amazing happiness!!!
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