Game of Throne.
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I fined actor\'s name of drama. He\'s name is Kit Harington. He have a nice voice and face. when I saw first time for drama. It was Game of Throne. It is very famous drama in the world. maybe you watched at one time. If you did\'t watch yet, next time try.
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Hello, [이름]! Thank you for this. I appreciate your effort to search for John Snow\'s real name. ^^ I can tell you are a big fan of Game of Thrones and Kit Harington. ^^ I will certainly try to watch Game of Thrones during my free time in the future~ ^^
-T. Harmony
I fined actor\'s name of drama.
-T. Harmony
I fined actor\'s name of drama.
>> I found the actor\'s name from the drama.
He\'s name is Kit Harington.
>>His name is Kit Harington.
He have a nice voice and face.
>> He has a nice voice, and so is his face.
when I saw first time for drama.
>> When I saw him for the first time in the drama.
It was Game of Throne.
>> It is called \"Game of Thrones\".
It is very famous drama in the world.
>> It is a famous drama watched by people all over the world.
maybe you watched at one time.
>> Perhaps you have watched Game of Thrones at least once in the past.
If you did\'t watch yet, next time try.
>> If you haven\'t watched it, I suggest you give it a try.
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