Gang Min Ho go to another team
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Maybe he wants to be with other players.
He wants to have other friends. ^^
Anyway, only Kang Min Ho knows the reason.
Watch their games and tell me about it. ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Lotte Giants player Gang Min Ho go to another team.
>> Lotte Giants player Gang Min Ho went to another team.
>> or: Lotte Giants player Kang Min Ho joined another team.
Lotte and Samsung said give same money but he chose Samsung.
>> Lotte and Samsung said that they goffered the same amount of money, but he chose Samsung.
I am curious why Gang Min Ho go there.
>> I am curious why Gang Min Ho went there.
He is a player at Lotte for 14years.
>> He is a player of Lotte Giants for 14 years.
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