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There are big gap in terms of jop satisfaction in Korean teachers.
The younger teachers tend to lower than the older teachers.
It is fact that the sense of professional mission of younger generation become weaken compare to before.
That is related to change of people\'s conciousness .
Many people pursue to a life not to working
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Hello, Ms. [이름]!
Lower job satisfaction may also be related to factors such as increasing administrative duties, student behavior issues, job stress, and changing expectations of the teaching profession.
Aki~
There are big gap in terms of jop satisfaction in Korean teachers.
>>> There is a big gap in terms of job satisfaction among Korean teachers.
The younger teachers tend to lower than the older teachers.
>>> The younger teachers tend to be lower than the older teachers.
It is fact that the sense of professional mission of younger generation become weaken compare to before.
>>> It is a fact that the sense of professional mission of the younger generation become weaken compare to before.
That is related to change of people\'s conciousness .
>>> That is related to the change in people\'s consciousness.
Many people pursue to a life not to working
>>> Many people pursue a life without work.
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