Garden
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme : [ESSAY] Describe your ideal garden.
I will plant some hearbs.
And I\'ll plant roses and mu-gung-huas.
I\'ll put a swimming pool and hot spring.
Then, you can swim or do the spa and see some flowers together!
It\'ll be great!
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Here\'s your corrected homework, [이름]!
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Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme : [ESSAY] Describe your ideal garden.
I will plant some hearbs. And I\'ll plant roses and mu-gung-huas.
>> I will plant some herbs, roses, and the rose of Sharon. [Note the spelling of \"herbs\". Also, the English name of mugunghwa is rose of Sharon.]
I\'ll put a swimming pool and hot spring.
>> Also, I\'ll put a swimming pool and a hot spring.
Then, you can swim or do the spa and see some flowers together!
>> Then, you can swim or have a spa and see some flowers at the same time!
>> or: Then you enjoy the flowers while swimming or having a spa at the same time!
It\'ll be great!
>> correct~~
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