Gardening
학생이 쓴 원문
Would you consider gardening around your house? Why or why not?
What are the advantages and disadvantages of gardening?
- I think that gardening around our house is good for us.
The nature like flowers, trees and other plants makes people comfortable and peaceful.
It is the advantage of gardening.
But gardening costs money, time and efforts.
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [Name]!
~Lucy
I think that gardening around our house is good for us.
>>CORRECT!
The nature like flowers, trees and other plants makes people comfortable and peaceful.
The nature like flowers, trees and other plants makes people comfortable and peaceful.
>>CORRECT!
It is the advantage of gardening.
It is the advantage of gardening.
>>CORRECT!
But gardening costs money, time and efforts.
But gardening costs money, time and efforts.
>>CORRECT!
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