Gardening
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I have a small vegetable garden in my second house in the countryside. Every weekend I and my husband go there. We take a rest and grow many flowers and vegetablee. Through gardening, our family can get fresh and organic vegetables. And our garden gives us seasonal healthy crops and fruit, such as strawberries, cherries, and blueberries in spring, sticky corns, tomatoes, some beans, and potatoes in summer, and apples and jujubes in fall. One more thing , through gardening , we can do some exercises and reduce some stress ~
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I have a small vegetable garden in my second house in the countryside.
>> CORRECT! Every weekend I and my husband go there.
>> Every weekend, my husband and I go there.
We take a rest and grow many flowers and vegetablee.
>> We take a rest and grow many flowers and vegetables.
Through gardening, our family can get fresh and organic vegetables.
>> CORRECT! And our garden gives us seasonal healthy crops and fruit, such as strawberries, cherries, and blueberries in spring, sticky corns, tomatoes, some beans, and potatoes in summer, and apples and jujubes in fall.
>> CORRECT! One more thing , through gardening , we can do some exercises and reduce some stress ~
>> CORRECT!
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