Gem,
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If you are a gem, what gem would you be?
I will sell them!!!!! That will be have a value.
If gem's value get higher, i wll sell and don't have a value i will keep in drawer
why?
Because it could'be better for house.
So now i will changed where to using.
That is if i need a money,,,
How about theacher???
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Hi my dear [이름] .^__^.
Wow, you are better than what I have thought, kkkk.. Thank you for asking me the same question. Suddenly I wouldn\'t like to haev a gem, I\'d rather a house and lot with a small garden in it, kkkk. You are very practical, good job!^^
Anyway my dear [이름], you did a very good job in your homework today, keep doing your best. Have a wodnerful time for now and I\'lls ee you later in class with your sweet laughter.^^
Janette~
If you are a gem, what gem would you be?>> correctI will sell them!!!!!
>> correct
OR >> I will sell them!
That will be have a value.
>> That will have some value.If gem\'s value get higher, i wll sell and don\'t have a value i will keep in drawer>> If the gem\'s value gets high, I will sell it. But if not, then I will just keep it in a drawer.why?>> correct
OR >> Why?Because it could\'be better for house.
>> It is better to keep it inside the house.So now i will changed where to using.
>> So I can change it whenever I want to.That is if i need a money,,,>> That is if I need money.How about theacher???
>> How about you teacher?
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