Gemma, hi! I can\'t decide on title. Haha

2021-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 Gemma

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(But the very familiar term \'interaction\' could) be an usher into the alien world of quantumn, I guess. *For me, I started by reading the book <양자공부> by my favorite physicist, 김상욱. It was very difficult but so so attractive somehow. **Gemma, this part is the next part of the previous writing.^^ ㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡ I\'m reading <5분 뚝딱 철학> by 정필영. The book is just like <지대넓얇> of the field of philosophy for me. It\'s concise but it has everything of philisophy. It\'s perfect for a layperson like me. Moreover the font size is pretty big. I love the book about that too.^^&#160; I heard his You Tube channel has been topped the most-viewed among philosophy-related channels.&#160; He seems to be a celebrity now. Not until a couple of months ago did I know about him and his You Tube channel at all.&#160; One day the Algorithm recommmended his channel. This is the fist one that I encountered.&#160; He deals with all things that I\'m into: philosophy, science, and psychology. His book and channels are really my things.

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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
(But the very familiar term \'interaction\' could) be an usher into the alien world of quantum, I guess.
>>> CORRECT
*For me, I started by reading the book <양자공부> by my favorite physicist, 김상욱.
>>> CORRECT
 It was very difficult but so so attractive somehow.
>>> CORRECT

**Gemma, this part is the next part of the previous writing.^^
ㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡㅡ
I\'m reading <5분 뚝딱 철학> by 정필영. 
>>> CORRECT
The book is just like <지대넓얇> of the field of philosophy for me.
>>> CORRECT
 It\'s concise but it has everything of philosophy. 
>>> CORRECT
It\'s perfect for a layperson like me. 
>>> CORRECT
Moreover the font size is pretty big. 
>>> CORRECT
I love the book about that too.^^
>>> CORRECT
 I heard his You Tube channel has been topped the most-viewed among philosophy-related channels.&#160;
>>>  I heard this YouTube channel has been  top the most-viewed among philosophy-related channels.
 He seems to be a celebrity now.
>>> CORRECT
Not until a couple of months ago did I know about him and his You Tube channel at all.
>>> CORRECT
One day the Algorithm recommended his channel. 
>>> CORRECT
This is the first one that I encountered.
>>> CORRECT
He deals with all things that I\'m into: philosophy, science, and psychology.
>>> CORRECT
His book and channels are really my style/type.
>>> CORRECT

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