gene-knockout mouse

2018-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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You have various kinds of gene-knockout mouse models. I want to assess the efficacy of human mesenchymal stem cells therapy on your scar model mouse. It is very hard to learn the technology to develop the mice model as well as to take the human stem cells abroad due to the regulation. So I wonder whether I could take your gene-manipulated mouse models to my country and collaborate morein the future. So I can perform an experiment in my laboratory. There are many collaborative research fund programs between countries in Korea. If we use this, we can get a fund for our collaboration. Do you also have those kind of fund application in the US? I wonder whether you and Dr. [Name] is using this kind of funding sources for your long term collaboration.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] [이름]!

There\'s really not much to change on your script. ^-^ I have some clarifications, but I\'ll just ask them later tonight during our class.

Thanks,

Amanda




You have various kinds of gene-knockout mouse models. I want to assess the efficacy of human mesenchymal stem cells therapy on your scar model mouse.
It is very hard to learn the technology to develop the mice model as well as to take the human stem cells abroad due to the regulation. So I wonder whether I could take your gene-manipulated mouse models to my country and collaborate morein the future. So I can perform an experiment in my laboratory.
There are many collaborative research fund programs between countries in Korea. If we use this, we can get a fund for our collaboration.
Do you also have those kind of fund application in the US?
I wonder whether you and Dr. [Name] is using this kind of funding sources for your long term collaboration.



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You have various kinds of gene-knockout mouse models. I would like to assess the efficacy of human mesenchymal stem cells therapy on your scar model mouse. It is very hard to learn the technology to develop the mice model as well as to take the human stem cells abroad due to some regulations. I wonder whether I could take your gene-manipulated mouse models to my country and collaborate more in the future so that I can perform an experiment in my laboratory. There are many collaborative research fund programs between countries in Korea. If we use this, we can get a fund for our collaboration. Do you also have those kind of programs in the US? I wonder whether you and Dr. [Name] are using this kind of funding sources for your long term collaboration. 







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