Generally, what do kids in Korea want to be when they grow up? Explain your answer.
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Generally, boys want to be police officer and YouTube creater when they grow up, girls want to be designer and idol when they grow up in Korea.
It maybe they think police officer is cool and right, YouTube creater is funny and rich, designer is [이름]rming, idol is pretty
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Generally, what do kids in Korea want to be when they grow up? Explain your answer.
Generally, boys want to be police officer and YouTube creater when they grow up, girls want to be designer and idol when they grow up in Korea.
>> Generally, boys want to be police officers and YouTube content creators when they grow up whereas girls want to be designers and idols when they grow up in Korea.
It maybe they think police officer is cool and right, YouTube creater is funny and rich, designer is [이름]rming, idol is pretty
>> Maybe they think being a police officer is cool and right, being a YouTube creator is fun and rich, being a designer is [이름]rming, and being an idol is pretty.
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