generation gap
학생이 쓴 원문
Middle-aged teachters like me feel a generation gap with youne teachers.
They seem to have different ways of work and thinking from privious teachters.
They are much smarter and better use the digiital systems.
They regard personal privacy as good factor in their life.
They prefer online meetings to offline meetings.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]! I think I understand your sentiment about the gap between middle-aged and young teachers. But of course, we cannot deny that experience is still the best teacher!
~Aki:)
Middle-aged teachters like me feel a generation gap with youne teachers.
>>> Middle-aged teachers like me feel a generation gap with young teachers.
>>> For a middle-aged like me, I feel the generation with young teachers.
They seem to have different ways of work and thinking from privious teachters.
They seem to have different ways of work and thinking from privious teachters.
>>> They seem to have different ways of working and thinking from the precious teachers.
They are much smarter and better use the digiital systems.
They are much smarter and better use the digiital systems.
>>> They are much smarter and use digital systems better.
They regard personal privacy as good factor in their life.
They regard personal privacy as good factor in their life.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> They consider privacy as part of their life.
They prefer online meetings to offline meetings.
They prefer online meetings to offline meetings.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> They are into online than offline meetings.
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