generation gap...

2018-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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I think generation gap. Frist, This time is unemployment problem. The elder do not understant. they think that we don`t ability. It is not that good job is not. or Often hired on the request. Second, ripped jean. I like ripped jean. but The Elder don`t like. but This is fashion.

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-T. Elisha

 I think generation gap.

>> I think there is a generation gap.
 Frist, This time is unemployment problem.

>> Firstly, there is an unemployment problem.

The elder do not understant.

>> The elderlies cannot understand this problem.
 they think that we don`t ability.

>> They think that we don\'t have abilities.

It is not that good job is not. or Often hired on the request.

>> It is not easy to find a good job upon request.
 Second, ripped jean. I like ripped jean. but The Elder don`t like. but This is fashion.

>> Secondly, they don\'t like ripped jeans but I do because I think they\'re fashionable.

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