Genetic and environmental effect on intellgence
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Hello, [이름]!(\",)
Thank you for giving me your time again and finishing this composition. Well, genetics play an important role in one\'s intelligence but you are right, the people we deal with at a young age and the environment we live in is equally important.
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
Where does our intelligence come from?
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I think this question is like chicken-or-the egg controversy.
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We are learning a knowledge from our environment.
>> We learn something from our environment.
If you don\'t know about anything, you learn from the books and your friends, teachers.
>> If you want to know about something, you can learn from the books, your friends, or teachers.
And so you are developing your intellectual ability.
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Can your intelligence develop without such an environment? I don\'t think so.
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But I am not completely ignoring genetic factors.
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The basic background of intelligence in innate from parents.
>> The basic source of intelligence are our parents.
If there is no genetic defect, I think, everyone is similar level.
>> If there is no genetic defect, I think, everyone is in similar level.
Difference in ability is caused by disparity in personal interest and parent support.
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Especially, it is important for the effect of parent and teachers.
>> Parents and teachers have big influence in this.
Parents and teachers should constantly seek and develop their child and students\' interest.
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That is the effect of environment on intelligence.
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The genetic in based on intelligence, the environment covers it.
>> Genetics is the basis of intelligence and the environment covers it.
Children who are abandoned in the jungle are the same as the acting like animals.
>> Children who are abandoned in a jungle act like animals in the jungle.
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