genres of movies that i like
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I really like to watch a movie in my free time. and it became my hobby and small happiness in my daily life.
So, i gotta talk about the genres of movies that i like. First, i like a disaster genres like a global disaster or zombie movie.
In this genres, movies that i enjoyed are world warZ in America and Cold in Korea.
Especailly, the movie, \'Cold\' is similar to present situation in Korea right now.
Why i like this genres, I think these movie\'s story may become a reality. So after watching these movie, we increase our alertness.
And for the same reason, i can watch movies having a tension!
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I really like to watch a movie in my free time.
>>> CORRECT
and it became my hobby and small happiness in my daily life.
>>> It became my hobby and small happiness in my daily life.
So, i gotta talk about the genres of movies that i like.
>>> So, I need to talk about the genres of movies that I like.
First, i like a disaster genres like a global disaster or zombie movie.
>>> First, I like disaster genres like a global disaster or a zombie movie.
In this genres, movies that i enjoyed are world warZ in America and Cold in Korea.
>>> In this genre, the movies that I enjoyed are \"World War Z\" in America and \"Cold\" in Korea.
Especailly, the movie, \'Cold\' is similar to present situation in Korea right now.
>>> Especially, the movie \'Cold\' because it is similar to the present situation of Korea right now.
Why i like this genres, I think these movie\'s story may become a reality.
>>> Why I like this genres? I think this movie\'s story can become a reality.
So after watching these movie, we increase our alertness.
>>> So after watching this movie, we increased our alertness.
And for the same reason, i can watch movies having a tension!
>>> And for the same reason, I can watch movies feeling the tension!
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