Geom-mi ship
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The ship that was kidnapped by the somalian pirates was freed at 3pm(in Korea clock). We think they released us because they didn't havee enough money to care the people of the ship. Also, after the release of Samho-Jewerly, they are frightened and some shipmates looked as if they have serious diseases. It took 124days to be relased.
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Hello Joey,
That's good to hear that the people were finally released. I hope they get rescued as soon as possible. Take care!
-RJThe ship that was kidnapped by the somalian pirates was freed at 3pm(in Korea clock).
>>The ship that was kidnapped by the Somalian pirates was freed at 3pm (Korean time).
We think they released us because they didn't havee enough money to care the people of the ship.
>>We think they released the ship because they didn't have enough money to care of the people on the ship.
Also, after the release of Samho-Jewerly, they are frightened and some shipmates looked as if they have serious diseases.
>>Also, after the release of Samho-Jewerly, they are frightened and some shipmates looked as if they had serious diseases.
It took 124days to be relased.
>>It took them 124days to be released.
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