George Town
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George Town is multicultural capital city of Penang.It is very colorful and inviting city. It has a beautiful harmony of historic buildings and modern skyscrapers like Seoul.It is also known for many street arts, delicious street food, and natural attractions such as Penang Hill and beaches.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
It\'s nice to know that Penang can maintain its history while at the same time adapting to modern society. It\'s really interesting to see this blend in a city, and I think this is why it\'s considered a national heritage site by UNESCO. Also, great job with your sentences! Just a minor correction: don’t forget to add \'a\' in sentences when needed, such as ‘a colorful city’ or ‘a multicultural capital.\'
- T. Caitlyn
George Town is multicultural capital city of Penang.
>> George Town is a multicultural capital city of Penang.
It is very colorful and inviting city.
>> It is a very colorful and inviting city.
It has a beautiful harmony of historic buildings and modern skyscrapers like Seoul.
>> CORRECT
It is also known for many street arts, delicious street food, and natural attractions such as Penang Hill and beaches.
>> It is also known for its street art, delicious street food, and natural attractions such as Penang Hill and its beaches.
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