Georgia
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I think Georgia is not a modern country in a technological terms. Basically Internet wasn\'t working well even in the capital city, Tbilisi as well as countryside. Most of hotels have bedrooms with manual keys. Even some hotels and restaurants don\'t have air-conditioning systems. Above all there aren\'t enough we\'ll organized public transportations.
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Hello, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing what you\'ve observed about Georgia in terms of technology. I can imagine that it is like a traditional country, still content with the technology of the past.
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I think Georgia is not a modern country in a technological terms.
>> I think Georgia is not a modern country in terms of technology.
Basically Internet wasn\'t working well even in the capital city, Tbilisi as well as countryside.
>> Basically, the internet wasn\'t working well even in the capital city, Tbilisi, as well as in the countryside.
Most of hotels have bedrooms with manual keys.
>> Most hotels have bedrooms with manual keys.
Even some hotels and restaurants don\'t have air-conditioning systems.
>> CORRECT
Above all there aren\'t enough we\'ll organized public transportations.
>> Above all, there isn\'t enough well-organized public transportation.
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