Germs and cleanliness.

2023-04-27 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

학생이 쓴 원문

Yes I know someone who is really concerned about germs and cleanliness. She\'s a friend of a friend of mine, and she likes tidying up, cleaning, and washing up. And she hates dirt. When she sees dirt, she always wipes it off with a tissue. She doesn\'t even eat sweets or snacks for fear of running out of crumbs.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


Yes I know someone who is really concerned about germs and cleanliness. 
>>> Yes, I know someone who is really concerned about germs and cleanliness. 

She\'s a friend of a friend of mine, and she likes tidying up, cleaning, and washing up. 
>>> CORRECT!

And she hates dirt. When she sees dirt, she always wipes it off with a tissue. 
>>> CORRECT!

She doesn\'t even eat sweets or snacks for fear of running out of crumbs.
>>> CORRECT!

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