Get familiar with a new neighborhood
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually try to explore a new neighborhood right after moving to a new place. I am very curious about new environment or neighborhood. I like to explore all the alleys and visit shops in alleys . I also like to explore new popular restaurants. One more thing, I want to experience new nature in and near my neighborhood such as walking trails, mountains, and the lake. This way, I am getting familiar with my new neighborhood.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Gi [이름]!
I agree with you. The best way to familiarize ourselves with a new neighborhood or environment is by visiting different areas and exploring shops and restaurants. I hope that you continue discovering something good in your neighborhood every day!
- T. Caitlyn
I usually try to explore a new neighborhood right after moving to a new place.
>> CORRECT
I am very curious about new environment or neighborhood.
>> I am very curious about new environments or neighborhoods.
I like to explore all the alleys and visit shops in alleys .
>> I like to explore all the alleys and visit the shops in them.
I also like to explore new popular restaurants.
>> CORRECT
One more thing, I want to experience new nature in and near my neighborhood such as walking trails, mountains, and the lake.
>> One more thing: I want to experience the nature in and near my neighborhood, such as walking trails, mountains, and lakes.
This way, I am getting familiar with my new neighborhood.
>> CORRECT
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