get married
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that\'s quiet interesting question
i actually want to get married early in thirties. to be honest, this is my simple dream.
but before getting married, there is one mendatory
that\'s buying my house
but house prices is more expensive in korea than you could imagine
to make matters worse, house prices are especially more expensive in seoul than other cities
it\'s really terrible price
some professional say \"you have to save your entire salaries more than for 10 years\"
so i\'m not sure that i can get married early in thirties
to be honest, i don\'t know i can get married in thirties
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Good evening [이름] Woo!
I hope you would be able to find a decent job, so that you could start saving money.
Fighting!
that\'s quiet interesting question
>>That\'s quite an interesting question.
i actually want to get married early in thirties.
>>Actually, I want to get married in my early 30s.
to be honest, this is my simple dream.
>>To be honest, this is my simple dream.
but before getting married, there is one mendatory
>>But before you get married, there is one mandatory.
that\'s buying my house
>>That\'s buying a house.
but house prices is more expensive in korea than you could imagine
>>But in Korea, house prices are more expensive than you imagine.
to make matters worse, house prices are especially more expensive in seoul than other cities
>>To make matters worse, Seoul is especially expensive than other cities.
it\'s really terrible price
>>That\'s a terrible price.
some professional say \"you have to save your entire salaries more than for 10 years\"
>>Some experts say that you have to save your entire salary for 10 years.
so i\'m not sure that i can get married early in thirties
>>So I don\'t know if I can get married in my early 30s.
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