get out of the slump

2013-03-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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slupms are like inevitable assignments given to everyone in life. Life will be different depending on how you react them. Now, I am gonig to tell you about how to get over slumps. The first thing I do is to listen to Sermons from the paster and read a self - enrichment book when I feel depressed. Those make me feel that hope is still alive in my life. Next, auality food , decent coffee and bread help me feel better. Getting fresh air also make me get out of the slump.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]!!! A pleasant Monday morning~~~ Thanks for these great suggestions... ^^ I think we all do need to do those every once in a while! Please check the very minor corrections I\'ve made here. See you later~~~ T.Kristel slupms are like inevitable assignments given to everyone in life. >> Slumps are like inevitable assignments given to everyone in life.  Life will be different depending on how you react them. >> Life will be different depending on how you react to them.Now, I am gonig to tell you about how to get over slumps. >> Now, I am going to tell you about how to get over slumps. The first thing I do is to listen to Sermons from the paster and read a self - enrichment book when I feel depressed. >>  The first thing I do is to listen to Sermons from the pastor and read a self - enrichment book when I feel depressed.  Those make me feel that hope is still alive in my life. >>Those make me feel that hope is still present in my life. Next, auality food , decent coffee and bread help me feel better. >>Next, quality food , decent coffee and bread help me feel better. Getting fresh air also make me get out of the slump. >>Getting fresh air also make me get out of slump.  

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