get together
학생이 쓴 원문
we united together in January.
It was a lunar year Most people in Korea usually get together.
It is one of the longest holidays.
A lot of food is prepared and a memorial service is held
We sometimes play traditional games.
강사 첨삭
Hi Mrs. [Name]. You did great in your homework today. Almost no incorrect sentence but you have to properly use punctuation in your sentences. And remember to capitalize your first letter of your sentences.
Here are your corrections:
>> We united together last January.
It was a lunar year
>> CORRECT
>> It was a lunar year. (period)
Most people in Korea usually get together.
>> Most people in Korea usually get together during this year.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
>> A lot of food is prepared and a memorial service is held. (period)
>> CORRECT!
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