get together

2020-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

학생이 쓴 원문

we get together at yuseong where I live. This place is located in the middle of Korea. It easy to get together in the middle. We are so busy talking behind the scenes. Eat delicious things and talk about something without doing anything special.

강사 첨삭

Hi Mrs. [Name]. Thank you for doing your homework. You did a splendid job. Keep up the nice work. See you later! :)
-T. Jasper

Here are your corrections:

we get together at yuseong where I live.

>> CORRECT

Please use CAPITAL Letters on the first letter of the first word of your sentence. Use capital letters to NAMES as well.

>> We get together at Yuseong where I live.

This place is located in the middle of Korea.

>> CORRECT

It easy to get together in the middle.

>> It is easy to get together in a place found in the middle of a city.

We are so busy talking behind the scenes.

>> CORRECT

Eat delicious things and talk about something without doing anything special.

>> We eat delicious food and talk about something without doing anything special.

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