Getting a breakfast

2014-06-13 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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Hi Debby :) Nice to talk with you today. Did you have your breakfast today? As I said in the class, I didn't have breakfast this morning. In fact, it's a normal thing for me because I often miss my breakfast. First, a menu in the morining is always not good. Second, I'm not a morning person, so it's really hard for me to wake up early. Even though I wake up at 7:00a.m because of my alarm clock, I unconsciously turn it off and slepp again until the next alarm goes off. I absolutely agree with your teaching method. Thank you for asking me how I am. I do not know why the most students hate this. I don't think it's tricky, so don't think like that. :) Have a good weekend. Rest your weary bone. :) <Essay> I got a presentation in my lecture. In the presentation, I had to speak English. While I prepared for the presentation, it was challenged for me to speak English in front of people. However I do think that it is a good experience.

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Hi there [이름]^^ Thank you for the compliments. I feel glad I\'m you teacher so I get the chance to hear this things from you. Checking your homework is very interesting. Most of the time your corrections are minimal.^^ Hahahahaha. Some teachers would like to have a student like you.^^ I\'m lucky! ^^ I\'m sure you did fine with the presentation you mentioned. It is difficult to speak in English but it is a bigger challenge to speak in front of a lot of people. If you had a good experience I\'m sure you are prepared for better and bigger presentations in the future. Brace yourself for bigger challenges! Aja^^ Fighting!^^ ^^T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you: Hi Debby :)Nice to talk with you today. >>CORRECT OR> Hi there Debby^^. It was fun talking to you today.^^Did you have your breakfast today? >> CORRECT OR> Did you eat today? As I said in the class, I didn\'t have breakfast this morning. >> CORRECT OR> I have mentioned earlier that I skipped breakfast. In fact, it\'s a normal thing for me because I often miss my breakfast. >> CORRECT OR> It\'s a usual habit for me to skip my breakfast.  First, a menu in the morining is always not good. >> CORRECT OR> Usually breakfast is not that good. Second, I\'m not a morning person, so it\'s really hard for me to wake up early. >> CORRECT Or> And I\'m not what you\'ll consider as a \"morning person\" and I have difficulty waking up early.  Even though I wake up at 7:00a.m because of my alarm clock, I unconsciously turn it off and slepp again until the next alarm goes off. >> Even though I wake up at 7:00a.m because of my alarm clock, I unconsciously turn it off and sleep again until the next alarm goes off. I absolutely agree with your teaching method. >> CORRECT OR> I appreciate the way you teach me. Thank you for asking me how I am. >> CORRECT OR> Thank you for asking me  how I feel all the time.  I do not know why the most students hate this. >> CORRECT OR> I\'m not so sure why it\'s different with other students.  I don\'t think it\'s tricky, so don\'t think like that. :) >> CORRECT OR> I don\'t consider it tricky, so do not think that way.Have a good weekend.>> CORRECT OR> Have a nice weekend.Rest your weary bone. :)>> CORRECT OR> Take a good rest.^^<Essay>I got a presentation in my lecture. >> CORRECT OR> I made a great impression on my lecture.  In the presentation, I had to speak English. >> CORRECT OR> I have to use English for that presentation. While I prepared for the presentation, it was challenged for me to speak English in front of people. >> While I prepared for the presentation, it was challenging for me to speak English in front of people. However I do think that it is a good experience. >>CORRECT OR> I consider it as a good experience.

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