Getting a breakfast
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Debby :)
Nice to talk with you today.
Did you have your breakfast today? As I said in the class, I didn't have breakfast this morning. In fact, it's a normal thing for me because I often miss my breakfast. First, a menu in the morining is always not good. Second, I'm not a morning person, so it's really hard for me to wake up early. Even though I wake up at 7:00a.m because of my alarm clock, I unconsciously turn it off and slepp again until the next alarm goes off.
I absolutely agree with your teaching method. Thank you for asking me how I am. I do not know why the most students hate this. I don't think it's tricky, so don't think like that. :)
Have a good weekend.
Rest your weary bone. :)
<Essay>
I got a presentation in my lecture. In the presentation, I had to speak English. While I prepared for the presentation, it was challenged for me to speak English in front of people. However I do think that it is a good experience.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]^^
Thank you for the compliments. I feel glad I\'m you teacher so I get the chance to hear this things from you.
Checking your homework is very interesting. Most of the time your corrections are minimal.^^
Hahahahaha. Some teachers would like to have a student like you.^^ I\'m lucky! ^^
I\'m sure you did fine with the presentation you mentioned. It is difficult to speak in English but it is a bigger challenge
to speak in front of a lot of people. If you had a good experience I\'m sure you are prepared for better and bigger
presentations in the future. Brace yourself for bigger challenges! Aja^^ Fighting!^^
^^T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
Hi Debby :)Nice to talk with you today.
>>CORRECT
OR> Hi there Debby^^. It was fun talking to you today.^^Did you have your breakfast today?
>> CORRECT
OR> Did you eat today?
As I said in the class, I didn\'t have breakfast this morning.
>> CORRECT
OR> I have mentioned earlier that I skipped breakfast.
In fact, it\'s a normal thing for me because I often miss my breakfast.
>> CORRECT
OR> It\'s a usual habit for me to skip my breakfast.
First, a menu in the morining is always not good.
>> CORRECT
OR> Usually breakfast is not that good.
Second, I\'m not a morning person, so it\'s really hard for me to wake up early.
>> CORRECT
Or> And I\'m not what you\'ll consider as a \"morning person\" and I have difficulty waking up early.
Even though I wake up at 7:00a.m because of my alarm clock, I unconsciously turn it off and slepp again until the next alarm goes off.
>> Even though I wake up at 7:00a.m because of my alarm clock, I unconsciously turn it off and sleep again until the next alarm goes off. I absolutely agree with your teaching method.
>> CORRECT
OR> I appreciate the way you teach me.
Thank you for asking me how I am.
>> CORRECT
OR> Thank you for asking me how I feel all the time.
I do not know why the most students hate this.
>> CORRECT
OR> I\'m not so sure why it\'s different with other students.
I don\'t think it\'s tricky, so don\'t think like that. :)
>> CORRECT
OR> I don\'t consider it tricky, so do not think that way.Have a good weekend.>> CORRECT
OR> Have a nice weekend.Rest your weary bone. :)>> CORRECT
OR> Take a good rest.^^<Essay>I got a presentation in my lecture.
>> CORRECT
OR> I made a great impression on my lecture.
In the presentation, I had to speak English.
>> CORRECT
OR> I have to use English for that presentation.
While I prepared for the presentation, it was challenged for me to speak English in front of people.
>> While I prepared for the presentation, it was challenging for me to speak English in front of people.
However I do think that it is a good experience.
>>CORRECT
OR> I consider it as a good experience.
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