Getting advice from elders is more valuable than getting advice from friends of your own age.

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It depends on what problem you want to get advice about.

>> It depends on what aspect would you like to get an advice.

If the problems are the issue that could occur when the elders are young such as the relationship among friends or anything, advice of old people is useful and effective as a rule.

>> If the problem is about relationships, it is better to seek an advice from the elderly people than your friends.

This is because, they have already experienced similar cases, so the can give you good tips.

>> This is because they have already been through similar situation so they can give you some pieces of advice.

For example, I had a conflict with my boss in work in reference to his orders.

>> For example, I had a conflict with my boss due to his demands.

He called me almost every weekend and said \"Come to the office and precess something, Only you can do it\".

>> He almost calls me every weekend just to let me go to the office because he thinks that I\'m the only person who can do the job.

So I consulted to my father, he gave me advice that you can request something later instead of being given boss\'s unjust order.

>> So I talked to my father to give me some pieces of advice. He told me that I need to tell my boss that I can\'t work beyond my working hours.

As a result, I could go to the graduate school with early leaving off at weekday.

>> As a result, I could go to my graduate school during the weekdays.

On the other hand, if the problems are about something that only today\'s young people know, a elder\'s advice might not effective, and it is more helpful to query to friends of your own age.

>> On the other hand, if the problems is about today\'s issues, I think the elderly people are not the right people to ask for instead we can seek some pieces of advice from our friends or peers.