getting old?

I can hardly see good things about aging, but there are too many cons about getting old. Aging is gradually stealing my memory. I have a short memory and it takes me longer than before to study or memorize something. My body does not bounce back from illness, injury, or a tough workout as quickly as it used to. When I sprain my ankle or cut my finger, it takes me long to be cured. I worry about my health because I begin to hear and see that my friends come and go in my life. When I am left alone, I sometimes wonder where the years have gone. I feel like I just started my career after graduating from the university yesterday, but I am already old enough to be conscious of my retirement. When I wake up and look at the mirror, I’m watching myself change on the outside. The strange man is staring at me, and I don’t like it. I get weaker, look worse, have a harder time staying in shape, lose my usefulness in society, have more stress and are getting closer to death.

Good evening Sir [이름]! Thank you very much for making my day. Whenever you write an essay, you compose great sentences! I can see your improvements in writing! Keep it up! Express your ideas more in class and in writing. I think getting old is a bit difficult. It is because you have to be more conscious abotu your health and about the people you love. A great and meaningful composition. Thank you. Please go over the corrections below. See you tomorrow! Good night!Teacher Nina   I can hardly see good things about aging, but there are too many cons about getting old. >> I can hardly see the good things about aging, but there are too many cons about getting old. Aging is gradually stealing my memory. >> Correct! I have a short memory and it takes me longer than before to study or memorize something. >> I have a short memory and it takes me longer to study or memorize something than before. >> OR: My memory gets weaker and it takes a long time for me to study or memorize something than before. My body does not bounce back from illness, injury, or a tough workout as quickly as it used to. >> Correct! When I sprain my ankle or cut my finger, it takes me long to be cured. >> When I sprain my ankle or cut my finger, it takes a long time to be cured. I worry about my health because I begin to hear and see that my friends come and go in my life. >> I am worried about my health becuase I begin to hear and see that my friends come and go in my life. When I am left alone, I sometimes wonder where the years have gone. >> Correct >> OR: When I am alone, I sometimes wonder where the years have gone. I feel like I just started my career after graduating from the university yesterday, but I am already old enough to be conscious of my retirement. >> Correct When I wake up and look at the mirror, I’m watching myself change on the outside. >> When I wake up and look at the mirror, I can see some changes in my physical appearance. The strange man is staring at me, and I don’t like it. >> A strange man is staring at me and I don\'t like it. I get weaker, look worse, have a harder time staying in shape, lose my usefulness in society, have more stress and are getting closer to death. >> I get weaker, look worse, have a harder time staying in shape, lose my usefulness in society, have more stress and is getting closer to death.