Getting old is meaning that time is flowing.
학생이 쓴 원문
In orient world, getting old means time passes not stopping but consistently.
On a sudden time, I would know that I am old in some times of future.
Few live to be one hundred years old.
I want to live to one hundred years.
I watch old movies at odd moments.
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In orient world, getting old means time passes not stopping but consistently.
>> In Eastern world, getting old means time passes by.
>> In Eastern world, getting old means time passes by.
On a sudden time, I would know that I am old in some times of future.
>> Now, I am getting old.
>> Now, I am getting old.
Few live to be one hundred years old.
>> Few people live to be a hundred years old.
>> Few people live to be a hundred years old.
I want to live to one hundred years.
>> I also want to live to be a hundred years old.
>> I also want to live to be a hundred years old.
I watch old movies at odd moments.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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