Getting on my nerves

2010-09-28 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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The negotiation to unify our country ends up breaking down. The negotiation between two delegations from the South and the North Korea to help the separated families to meet ended up in vague due to the North’s betrayal. Their cooing ends up quarreling He was getting on my nerves by telling me over and over about my enunciation. President Lee declared over and over to put importance on the common people’s budget. I advised to him over and over that he needs some exercises When we were young my brother and I used to giggle with non important things. If the audience was giggling during the performance the player will be surely gotten on his/her nerves.

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Ms. [Name]!!! Thank you so much for passing this composition. Most of your sentences are correct I just tried to paraphrase some of the sentences. Always keep up the good work!!! See you later beautiful and sweet Ms. [Name]!!!! Lei J   The negotiation to unify our country ends up breaking down. >>correctThe negotiation between the two delegations from South and North Korea to help the separated families to meet ended up in vague due to North Korea's betrayal. >>correctTheir cooing ends up quarreling >>With their cooing they end up quarrelingHe was getting on my nerves by telling me over and over about my enunciation. >>correctPresident Lee declared over and over to put importance on the common people’s budget. >>correctI advised to him over and over that he needs some exercises >>I advised him over and over that he needs to have some exerciseWhen we were young my brother and I used to giggle over non important things. >>correctIf the audience was giggling during the performance the player will be surely gotten on his/her nerves. >>When an audience is giggling during a performance, he/she will surely get on the player뭩 nerves.

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