Getting promotions are one of the biggest motivators for hard work in the modern workplace. Why are
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The MZ generations have a different view about happy life. Old generations thought money is the main factor that made us happy. In order to make a lot of money, people used to work until late night before. However, people think that money is not a major thing they consider. Work and life balance is the most important in modern society. Of course, getting promotions are one of the happiest things for us, but if we get promoted, we will have more work and responsibilities. So, it has both side view, one can be motivator for people who work hard, the other can be disadvantages because some people don\'t want to put too much energy while they are working. So, administrators have to find various way that can motivate their employees such as introduction of flexible working hours, teleworking and so on. People don\'t want to spend more time at work, but they would like to enjoy their life by doing things what they like. So, if company can provide various interests, it will be good for every
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>>> TEACHER GEMMA
The MZ generations have a different view about a happy life.
>>> CORRECT
Old generations thought money is the main factor that make us happy.
>>> CORRECT
In order to make a lot of money, people used to work until late night before.
>>> CORRECT
However, people think that money is not a major thing they consider.
>>> CORRECT
Work and life balance is the most important in modern society.
>>> CORRECT
Of course, getting promotions are one of the happiest things for us, but if we get promoted, we will have more work and responsibilities.
>>> CORRECT
So, it has both views, one can be a motivator for people who work hard, the other can be disadvantages because some people don\'t want to put too much effort while they are working.
>>> CORRECT
So, administrators have to find various ways that can motivate their employees such as introduction of flexible working hours, teleworking and so on.
>>> CORRECT
People don\'t want to spend more time at work, but they would like to enjoy their life by doing things they like.
>>> CORRECT
So, if company can provide various interests, it will be good for every...
>>> CORRECT
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