getting up early or late.
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I prefer to get up early.
But unfortunately, I can't wake up early.
It is hard for me.
So whenever I have a test,
I prefer to study at night.
Because I can concentrate on studying at night well.
I guess a night is calmer than a day
and we can't see other things easily.
Se just can see place where light turns on.
However, choice depends on person.
Both of them have each advantages and disadvantages.
So I choose getting up late.
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Actually, I prefer to get up early.>> Correct!But unfortunately, I can\'t wake up early.>> Correct!It is hard for me.>> Correct!So whenever I have a test,I prefer to study at night.>> Correct!Because I can concentrate on studying at night well.>> Correct!I guess a night is calmer than a day and we can\'t see other things easily.
>> I guess the night is calmer than day time and we can\'t see other things easily.Se just can see place where light turns on.
>> We only see then when we turn on the lights.However, choice depends on person.>> However, the choice depends on the person.Both of them have each advantages and disadvantages.>> Both of them have advantages and disadvantages.So I choose getting up late.
>> Correct!
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