Ghost and Afterlife
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe ghost. It is something weird phenomenon that we can't prove reason by science. I think that it shows spiritual active. Afterlife is very curious subject. Is afterlife heaven and hell like christian says? I don't believe god so that I don't believe hell. I think bad people have to reincarnation by theirselves like buddhism says. There is not judgement in afterlife. However, I'm not sure about afterlife. If afterlife is real, there are too many ghosts. What are they doing for a long time? I can find answer after I died.
Today I heard shocking news to my friend. His ex-girl friend had two-timing. He felt a sense of betrayal when he knew that she had another real lover. I couldn't tell him anything.
강사 첨삭
HI [이름],
I read your view about the after life.
Well, I hope as you grow older you will find the answer to your questions. (^_^)
I found mine and I hold on to it.
See you in a little while,
-- Connie --
I believe ghost.
>> I believe in ghosts.
It is something weird phenomenon that we can't prove reason by science.
>> It is something weird but it scientifically proven.
I think that it shows spiritual active.
>> I think it shows spiritual activeness.
Afterlife is very curious subject.
>> Afterlife is an interesting subject, I’m curious about it.
Is afterlife heaven and hell like christian says?
>> Is after life all about heaven and hell like Christian says?
I don't believe god so that I don't believe hell.
>> I don’t believe in God so I don’t believe in hell.
I think bad people have to reincarnation by theirselves like buddhism says.
>> I believe in reincarnation for bad people as Buddhism says.
There is not judgement in afterlife.
>> There is no judgment afterlife.
However, I'm not sure about afterlife.
>> Correct
If afterlife is real, there are too many ghosts.
>> Correct
What are they doing for a long time?
>> Correct
I can find answer after I died.>> I can find the answer after my death.
>> If I will die, I will find the answer. Today I heard shocking news to my friend.
>> Today, I heard a shocking news from my friend.
His ex-girl friend had two-timing.
>> His ex-girlfriend is a two-timer.
He felt a sense of betrayal when he knew that she had another real lover.
>> Correct
I couldn't tell him anything.
>> Correct
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