Gift
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I really like giving a gift to my loved ones. Especially, when i give someone a gift, that the person who received my gift feel looks good makes me happy. I think touching someone is one of my happiness. On the contrary, Receiving a gift doesn’t matter much for me. Even though i gave someone a present, i will be disappointed if i don’t get it. But i think would forget that soon.
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I really like giving a gift to my loved ones.
>> I really like giving gifts to my loved ones.
Especially, when i give someone a gift, that the person who received my gift feel looks good makes me happy.
>> Especially, when the person who received my gift looks happy, it makes me happy too.
I think touching someone is one of my happiness.
>> I think making other people happy is also my happiness.
On the contrary, Receiving a gift doesn’t matter much for me.
>> On the contrary, Receiving a gift doesn’t matter much to me.
Even though i gave someone a present, i will be disappointed if i don’t get it.
>> However, sometimes I feel disappointed when I don\'t get any gifts from people even though I gave them some.
But i think would forget that soon.
>> But I think it will not matter that much to me soon.
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