Gift for Christmas
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Hey Jay,
That must have been awesome! I mean receiving the toy you wanted as a gift for Christmas. Those kinds of memories can never be replaced.(\",)
~Lynn
I used to receive Christmas gift annually, and it was the moment I had been looking forward to.
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There was a synthetic tree in the living room, and I woke up early in the Christmas morning to see my gift.
>> There was a synthetic tree in the living room, and I woke up early on Christmas morning to see my gift.
I received many gifts and the RC car was my favorite gift.
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I said my parents that I want to get RC car and want to control it, but my parents didn\'t buy it until the Christmas.
>> I asked my parents to buy me RC car but my parents didn\'t buy it until Christmas.
When I unwrapped the box and saw the RC car, I was so happy and screaming.
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So, I assembled it just right that moment and started to control it in the house.
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It could rotate its head part and even though it was flipped over, it could go ahead continually.
>> It could rotate its head part and even though it was flipped over, it could still move.
It was so fancy and I wanted to show my RC car to my friends.
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Actually, it was so impressed, so nothing recur to my mind.
>> Actually that was the most impressive gift I have ever received that I couldn\'t remember the other gifts.
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