Give a birth to a baby
학생이 쓴 원문
A person I know visited a house to celebrate the birth of a baby.
My wife got ready for small present for a baby.
We spent a good time looking at the baby.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Daniel! ^^,)
Happy Wednesday to you!^^ Thank you for this composition.
I have read it well. I also made some modifications for you to review later on.
Enjoy the rest of the day! See you later.
_T. Mayleen :)
A person I know visited a house to celebrate the birth of a baby.
>>> A person I know visited my house to celebrate the birth of their new baby.
My wife got ready for small present for a baby.
>>> My wife prepared a small present/gift for the baby.
We spent a good time looking at the baby.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: We had a good time playing with the baby.
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